Your Toy Blocks are excellent. the recolour the move and the skew are all very good. The only clue that you have manipulated the image is the colour of the wood behind the letters, perhaps you could have recoloured it as well.
Dion, your mark for the toy blocks was 95%. Narative PowerPoint- You manage to demonstrate an understanding of all the points. However if you are designing a PowerPoint it should inform the audience. Some more slides with stills from the two films illustarting your points would have enhanced this piece of work. 75%
Dion- Well done with the blog, it's all working well. Also thanks for the media diary.
ReplyDeleteDion, I have marked your Gavin and Stacey essay, please read the comments and print a copy for your file.
ReplyDeleteYour Toy Blocks are excellent. the recolour the move and the skew are all very good. The only clue that you have manipulated the image is the colour of the wood behind the letters, perhaps you could have recoloured it as well.
ReplyDeleteMr. Burton - is the essay the final mark? Or am I still allowed to change it before you read it again?
ReplyDeleteThe marking was an experiment and will change but the deadline has passed so leave it as it is.
ReplyDeleteThanks.
Dion, your mark for the toy blocks was 95%.
ReplyDeleteNarative PowerPoint- You manage to demonstrate an understanding of all the points. However if you are designing a PowerPoint it should inform the audience. Some more slides with stills from the two films illustarting your points would have enhanced this piece of work.
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